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The Night by Hermetic-Wings The Night by Hermetic-Wings
Breath deep
The gathering gloom
Watch lights fade
From every room
Bedsitter people
Look back and lament
Another day's useless
Energy spent

Impassioned lovers
Wrestle as one
Lonely man cries for love
And has none
New mother picks up
And suckles her son
Senior citizens
Wish they were young

Cold hearted orb
That rules the night
Removes the colours
From our sight
Red is gray and
Yellow white
But we decide
Which is right
And
Which is an Illusion

Nights in White Satın / The Days of the Fiture Passed-The Moddy Blues
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mixdouble Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Faved...

Strong composition...!
The street itself is a picture...
the bonus of the lit window...
and the dimly lit roofs...
lifts the picture from the ground up into the night...
Very good use...of the mysterious darkest grey...
Greetings Ayhan...Jakob.
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Itineraires Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
fantastic mood !!!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow: dear Phlippe :D
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LordXar Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Bıçak diye bir öykü yazmıştım, oradaki atmosfere benzettim biraz. :)
Değşik bir tadı olmuş biraz. :)
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Yüklediğim ilk gece çekimi çalışmam bu!...Başkaları da olsun istşyorum bakalım..:)
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cdn1 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
Very nicely done! I like the graininess it gives the effect of a hot evening. The passageway is full of possibilities...like an encounter with the approaching stranger. :horns:
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
I tried to have some shots like you...I know that it is not a perfect one but, I am trying and And I will keep on...You are the artist that inspire a night shot to me...thank you so much...
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ombraillum Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007
mmm creepy... :thumbsup:
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Not for you!
It is mu first night shot submission...thanks for commenting! :)
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vesanisa Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007
bu karanlık beni hep ürkütmüşytür.
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Dost yanında olunca karanlık taraftan bakılmamış oluyor...İlerde ışık var Ceren kardeşim! :)
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vesanisa Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
yahu ayhan abi benim lensin içine toz kaçtı o dedin şeyleri kurban bayramında alcam lensin iç tarafında toz ne yapcam bilmiom sen bişeyler sölicek olursan msj at ben hepğ olabiliyorum burda biliyorsun arada öğlenleri bakabiliyorum sonra derse gene senden beklicem haber unutma sakın ya ara ya msj at telime sevgiler.
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Buraya geldiğinde Servise götüreceksin, hava üfleyerek temizleyecekler sanırım...Senin başka bir şekilde temizleme şansın yok... ( bildiğim kadarıyla)
Sevgiler benden de! :)
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vesanisa Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
hmm umarim erzincanda bayisi vardır.
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Çok güvendiğin bir fotografcı yoksa, bekle İstanbul'da yaparsın! :)
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GuitarElph Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
Knights in White Satin is one of my favorite songs from the late 60s. I recently bought the best of the Moody Blues CD.

I like this photo and I hope you post more night shots. They can be difficult to do without a tripod, but that hasn't stopped me :-)
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes I know your very successfull night shots!...The days of the fiture passed is a concept album but, the song is my best of ever!..."Never reaching the end!" Was the most touching part for me since I a a little boy! :) Doug my dear, so happy to sahre some of my very best!...Thanks for commenting! :)
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mwacha Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
"Music of the night" would have been a good song too!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Please lsiten that song ıf you didn't since today! MAybe you can understand Why I choose it! :)
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mwacha Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
mm. I see why now. I love it!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks my young sister! :)
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mwacha Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
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Bodhisattva-Psyche Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2007
Oh boy I love how the light emerges from the back. Astonoshing night shot friend :)
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
You know who are inspiring me to take some night shot...I am trying to make better ones! Thanks for your support! :)
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Bodhisattva-Psyche Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2007
Your city at night looks beautiful :)
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh thanks! I will try more soo and really thanksfor your support! :)
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Bodhisattva-Psyche Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
You know is the truth :dnace:
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow: Endless thankies! :)
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mrcool256 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
Cool image... and I love that song... its one of my favorite of all time... its so poetic. Moody Blues is great...:D
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
hanks, That not a best shot! And maybe the ugliest one in my gallery but, my first night shot submission...So that's the importence of it ..Thanks for commenting...And Mody blues is still at the top for me, and specially with this song!
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mrcool256 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
Haha... I realize that... couldn't resist the Knights in White Satin lyrics thought! :highfive: :D
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
You are so kind.Thank you!
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alka-seltzer Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Neresi burasi?
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Üsküdar!...
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alka-seltzer Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Derinlik hosuma gitti :)
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
GEce bu derinliği almak bayağı zoruma gitti!..:)
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abdulicart Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
içim ürperiyor
ya evde yoksan ?
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Ta kendisi, bravo!...Bak senden başka hiç kimse bulamadı....Sana bir fav borçlu olayım....Commentlere verilmiyor çünkü...Dikkatli yaklaşımın için sozsuz teşekkürler! :)
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TagyK1 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
i dont know why i m writing this comment but i feel similar things bu this photo...

Now we are feeling pain
We wanna be together
Something blocking us
But i don’t know what it is
Something seperating us
Is it a big sea or a mount
There is no difference
We are looking same moon
We are listening same tune
And the day is coming soon
Which we are waiting for

Now you are goin’ away
You wanna be more free
Something restricting you
But i don’t know what it is
Something frightening you
Is it my love or devotion
There is no reason
We are singing same song
We are thinking same wrong
And the day is coming soon
Which we are waiting for

Give a chance to our emotions
Give a chance to our passions

That’s the immortal moment
You’re coming from opposite
Something inciting us
This time i know what it is
Something exciting us
Is it our love or glance
There’s so reasons
We are feeling the heat
We are hearing the beat
And it was the day
Which we were waiting for

I can’t remember how many times
I touched your mild hands
I can’t remember how many times
I looked your green eyes
I can’t remember how many times
I kissed your red lips
I can’t remember how many times
I said i love you
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Every oıne of us has our own wishes! You have somebody to tell that lyrics or sing maybe..."I can not remember how many time..." this was the end of your song and asking for a second chanse to your relationship....
Please read my song!
What are senior citisens doing?
What is lonely man crying for while the lights are fading at every room!!!?
And my son ends like:
"Cold hearted orb
That rules the night
Removes the colours
From our sight.."......No hopefull word included......:(
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TagyK1 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007
i tried to sing but i can not find a melody for this song for 4 years :) not new lyrics may be i can ask to spliced roll right? :) your song seem more professional than mine :)
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh melody!
It seems you will search for it to many more years...AND be sure you two can find the true tonnes only :)
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jevinart Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
how beautiful!!! if only to stroll down this street at night, and to steal a kiss in the dark shadows where no one will see....
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Passionate!
Did you read the lyrics of Moody Bluees? What do lovers do at such a night!?...ha ha ha!
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jevinart Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
yes i did! that's why i got all worked up!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
:nod:
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jerryh Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
Lurking around the streets at night, looking.

Nice capture.
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
I explore that street!..But I have not my camera with me.. I retun back to home and get it but, it became so late... It was my first night shot submission!
Thanks for commenting! :)
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kostya1860 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007
... bu gece son, biraz sonra bu kapıdan son kez çıkı;p yine kendimi vuracağım yollara...
n'olur parça parça olmasın içimiz!
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Hermetic-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Bu gece son son kez çıkılacak bu kapıdan... Gidenler avuntuda, kalanların basına yıkılacak kopkoyu karanlığıyla bu kuramsal dünya!
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